Final Music Video

Final Magazine Advert (Harry)

Magazine Advert Draft 1 and Feedback (Harry + Charlotte)

Feedback

I feel you could make this link to the video more - it would not sell me the album. Take photos linked to the music video and make it a little more creative

The font has made it look quite childish and quite basic - consider changing the font

Use the research you have done to inform your product

Record Label info should be at the bottom of the advert

Does the image have to take up the whole page? Again, link it to your music video and digipak

We will use this feedback by making the changes you have suggested as we all want to get the highest mark possible for our magazine advert

Final Digipak (Harry)

Digipak Draft 1 and Feedback (Harry)

Feedback

Please add in another 2 frames - make it a six section digipak

The writing down the spine is the wrong way round and is too big for the spine

Again, change the font

Use the research you have done to inform your product

There is too much sky

I do not get the photo of the park! 

Link it to the narrative of the video - having a good time!

You need record labels etc on the bottom of the track listing, like real media products

We will use this feedback by making the changes you have suggested as we all want to get the highest mark possible for digpak

Music Video Rough Cut 3 and Feedback (Harry)

Feedback

A good variety of shots
The video tells a narrative clearly at the start
Good use of jump cuts
Still doesn't feel quite like a music video

Music Video Rough Cut 2 and Feedback (Harry)

Things that work well

Your narrative start off well and builds up quite nicely, but you need to push it further

The performance section is a little more dynamic

Things to improve:

Wobbly camera on sink section

some shots are too long - maximum of 3 seconds for this song really

Charlotte has her lanyard on in the lip syncing

Michael is not singing into the microphone

The visuals could relate to the lyrics more

Lip syncing is out in the second section

Framing needs to be considered more

Why is Callum still in it?

We will use this feedback to make improvements on our work, specifically the areas that are mentioned in the feeback. We are going to solve the issue of the lanyard by re filming the recording studio scene to make sure we have got good continuity. We will rectify the lip syncing issues by using the apple macs to make sure we can get it as spot on as possible.