Things that work well
Your narrative start off well and builds up quite nicely, but you need to push it further
The performance section is a little more dynamic
Things to improve:
Wobbly camera on sink section
some shots are too long - maximum of 3 seconds for this song really
Charlotte has her lanyard on in the lip syncing
Michael is not singing into the microphone
The visuals could relate to the lyrics more
Lip syncing is out in the second section
Framing needs to be considered more
Why is Callum still in it?
We will use this feedback to make improvements on our work, specifically the areas that are mentioned in the feeback. We are going to solve the issue of the lanyard by re filming the recording studio scene to make sure we have got good continuity. We will rectify the lip syncing issues by using the apple macs to make sure we can get it as spot on as possible.
We will use this feedback to make improvements on our work, specifically the areas that are mentioned in the feeback. We are going to solve the issue of the lanyard by re filming the recording studio scene to make sure we have got good continuity. We will rectify the lip syncing issues by using the apple macs to make sure we can get it as spot on as possible.
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