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Positives
Some shots are held steady
The editing at the start is much better than the end
Even Better If
Lip syncing was correct - it is completely out - who is Michael?
Remember there is a girl singing the song too! You need a girl lip syncing
There were more people at the party or Callum and Charlotte are just doing fun stuff together
The narrative needs to be clearer - show Callum and Charlotte meeting up and having fun doing loads of different stuff - there needs to be more variety of things involved - running through a field, at the park etc
Need different locations - too much based interior
The visuals matched the lyrics!
Shots were shorter!
More content
From the feedback we have been given above, in order to successfully improve our music video, we will need to act upon it. To do this, we are going to re-film the lip syncing scene of our music video along with adding more sections with Callum and Charlotte having a "good time" (e.g. running through a park, playing on the swings etc.)
We are also going to ensure that we shorten the shots in our music video so that it will feel more like a conventional music video. We are also going to film again but in different locations, namely a park and a green playing field.
From the feedback we have been given above, in order to successfully improve our music video, we will need to act upon it. To do this, we are going to re-film the lip syncing scene of our music video along with adding more sections with Callum and Charlotte having a "good time" (e.g. running through a park, playing on the swings etc.)
We are also going to ensure that we shorten the shots in our music video so that it will feel more like a conventional music video. We are also going to film again but in different locations, namely a park and a green playing field.
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